The end is not near, we have past the end. Here there be dragons. We are in a place off the map. What we do from here will define the age to come. Know thyself and follow your heart, for the compass of morality lies therein.
This is an original by me, in thinking about where we are, where we’re going, and where we’ve been.
not to harsh your zen or whatevs, but you might want to edit this: past=passed
apparently we have not past basic English…
If you’re going to try to do the olde English thing at least be consistent, don’t just throw a random “thyself” and then use “your” in the same sentence
Haiku crit:
Your harvested quotes
Sprinkled with dull platitudes
A dish fit for clods
Well, despite the helpful suggestions from some of the other folks, I have to say that you made my day with that one. It shows a delightful take on the world, and one that many could benefit from embracing. Keep up the good attitude.
GODDAMMIT ASS HOLES. Do something cool, then FUKKIT up with lack of middle school grammar??