bad: weak cell shading and some of the breasts & cheeks highlights symmetry doesn’t support a flow.
good: realistic proportions and line strokes.
miss: not dropping a shadow off the risen bra strap.
overall: its a cute boy 😀 just kidding. depending on how long it took to draw the lines it can go anywhere from excellent to average: if it was lined without a model and say in 10-15min its damn good…
anime \ manga style in vector graphics is all about volume production: maintaining a good quantity \ quality ratio since the minimum is relatively quick to master for the artistically inclined and the actual job to to produce a shitload of material in a weekly format. imagine drawing 4 or 5 of this an hour for 8 hours a day, 5-6 days a week year round.