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Visual Hiaku

6 votes, average: 4.17 out of 56 votes, average: 4.17 out of 56 votes, average: 4.17 out of 56 votes, average: 4.17 out of 56 votes, average: 4.17 out of 5
(6 votes, average: 4.17 out of 5)
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    Belbo

    more like <3, <17, !,?, or -, and a seasonal reference.

    Beautiful girls
    running up the steps to the library,
    in shorts!

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    Sarcastastic

    That haiku did not meet form.
    Also, I like english in my comments.

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    Belbo

    3 or less lines, less than 17 syllables, a cutting punctuation, and a seasonal reference? It met form exactly, you are just ignorant of the form.

    I didn’t write it, Jack Kerouac did. So take it up with the greatest writer in English history.

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