The World Above – ch1 front page

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first page of a manga I am drawing…

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    Aquaman43
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    more.

    wait...
    Guest
    wait...

    “step step step”?
    Is that really a necessary sound effect? Sound effects are like speech. Having sound effects in a scene like this kind of ruins it.

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    And at the same time, what kind of sound effect is “step”? It’s like using “punch” as a sound effect.
    Think of the material of the shoe against the material of the floor. What does that sound like?

    Anon
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    Anon

    Apparently you have never read manga before. There are sound effects for everything. For example when you stare at something it sounds like “jiiii…”

    So saying “step, step, step” is fine because it actually makes me think of the sound of someone walking.

    HoChunk
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    That’s horseshit –“step” is hardly onomatopoeic.

    Anon
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    Anon

    Did I say it was onomatopoeic? Nope. I even gave an example of a very commonly used sound effect that is also not onomatopoeic (As staring is silent). My point is that sound effects in manga, which is the style he says he is using for formatting, do not need to be onomatopoeic.

    Also it is his own creative work so he can do whatever he pleases.

    HoChunk
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    ^ LOL…so when he’s climbing a wall, will the artist need to put in
    “climb climb climb” sound effects to make you think of the sound
    of someone climbing?

    No one can do as they please if they don’t please me first.
    KNEEL BEFORE ZOD.

    Kik Dogg
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    I love “step, step, step”!
    *poke*

    Reaver
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    “Fap, Fap, Fap”

    uif
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    uif

    If you wrote it it’s not manga it’s a comic.

    #makecasemdsgreatagain
    Member

    why no tentacles?

    HoChunk
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    A word on the title design: one could be forgiven if they glanced at it and thought it was called “TWAV”.

    Jac H
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    Jac H

    Might want to add some “bleed” to that background…



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