The World Above – ch1 front page

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first page of a manga I am drawing…

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    1. “step step step”?
      Is that really a necessary sound effect? Sound effects are like speech. Having sound effects in a scene like this kind of ruins it.


      • And at the same time, what kind of sound effect is “step”? It’s like using “punch” as a sound effect.
        Think of the material of the shoe against the material of the floor. What does that sound like?


    2. If you wrote it it’s not manga it’s a comic.


    3. A word on the title design: one could be forgiven if they glanced at it and thought it was called “TWAV”.


    4. Might want to add some “bleed” to that background…


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